Take it all in....
ok...at first i was all like Hell yeah, but then you moved into the song too fast, you need to work on your buildup...DON'T GET ME WRONG...this is an exelant song. seriously, a great song, you obviously put a lot of effort into it..
now then, the second synth sound u used sounded a little to flat, think about raising up the eq at around the 4 to about 20 Khz,i think that would really improve its sound.
you really have potential to remix this song into a 5.
the beats throughout the song...great change nothing with them, except towatds the end, the snare needs eq turned up about 4 id say in the 4-20Khz range.
damn...i am runng out of room...ok then here... overall, change the sounf of the snare, go longer and more indepth with each "section of the song" and lastly choose a differet saw wave for the second one...(the one right after the intro)... overall not a bad song, you obviously worked hard on this i can tell... go to my page to here what i am talking about on the whole snare thing and clarity issue.
keep at it, you can only improve...o am glad you chose a classical song to remix...especially my favorite one...definitly take into consideration all of everyones constructive critisism...and remix it, i would really like to hear it improved, it has much potential...but good job overall man.