it's certainly repetitive but you did good. this is also one of your simplest songs and thats a nice change. add a little riff variety and this would be awsome.
Nice Melody, but...
EXTREEMELY repetitive. I'm sorry that I cannot suggest many ways on fixing this, it's just something you learn to avoid after practice.
Otherwise, I did like the melody :) 3/5
Thanks for the input. I'm going to try to avoid so much repetition in the future.
Thanks for the review!