I like

Great melodic content with a funky little beat. All it really needs is a bit more of a bassline, though your kick drum has a nice thump.

4/5 9/10

All my 5 r belong to this!

Very VERY good job. Your production skills are extremely good. I can't think of anything to help you with this song, except that you should make an extended version of this extended version. This song deseves more than the 4 minutes of life you gave it. This is great also because it not only evokes a mood, it evokes an emotion inside listeners, it takes skill to be able to do that.