A SLIGHT DEMO COLLAB BETWEEN PAPERMAN AND ENDEAVOUR
This is practically my third song i finished.
Just like Endeavour - Summerstorm, this promised to be a collab.
The collaborator i would work with, is called : Paperman.
Check his stuff out on his page :
http://paperman12.newgrou nds.com
(remove space between the u and the n )
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This song started with an amazing melody Paperman had prepared.
He sent me the midi keys of the melody and also a pad string he made.
And i made all the stuff around it.
On the end, paperman mastered the song a bit so that it would sound better.
And this is a piece of the outcome.
The song itself is like 2:11 minutes long, and not 2:43.
Lol the effects are just bouncing on a tad to long..
We wil fix that in the full version.
Ive submitted it for gaining some criticm.
Im not fully satistfied with it yet.
should i make it DREAMY or a bit more TREBLISH ?.
should i make the bass harder or softer,
Remove choir and pads or add even more ?,
also, do you already grow tired of the melody, or can you hear it some more seconds.
(in short, how fast should i variate)
Thank you for listening,
Greets,
Endeavour AND Paperman
so, pm me when this song is complete yes?
iono, i think this melody is jus a flow-er, not a stopper. It was great dude, u got me on my heels. But yea finish this now!!!
base on the question, i wud have to agree to add JUS a tad bit more bass to it, the current one u have sounds a little to soft..... but jus add a TAD bit...and this song is golden!!
wow, thanks for the good review man =D,
Yes ill PM you when this is finished.
I currently got another project going on.
Its also on newgrounds, its called "cease to exist".
Yea this bass is a bit to muddled, to reeverbed.
I'll change that at the next version ^^.
Thanks in advance,
Endeavour
^_^
Another newgrounds gem song, so hard to find. When I find things that are actually good on here, I actually bother voting, so, 5/5 10/10, just get the effects fixed and it'll be lovely.
Keep it up!
xxAisarene
thanks for the review Aisarene =D.
And for the vote ofcourse!.
Could you describe the "effects fixed" critic a bit more ?,
I have no idea which effect you might mean.
grtz,
Endeavour.
Pleasant & Happy :D
Life is Really Good! Because i hear this Track!
Very beautiful, keep it up!! :D
Nice!!
Awesome Track!!
I love it!!
10/10
5/5
-Dj4Life :)
Thanks heaps for the reply DJ4Life =D.
Im glad you like it !!,
And thanks for the great vote score !! always helps ^^
Grts,
Endeavour
hey
You know i start reading and i read like "a slight demo collab between paperbat and endeavour", and im like WTF wait a minute.. PAPERBAT ?!?, is this gonna be some sort of joke,.... then i realise im an idiot and read it again.
Anyway, you're making some really good stuff, professional stuff. The sound is really good, i mean the track is a bit cheesy for my taste, but i can't say anything bad about it, it's really handled with care, the sound is soft, full and professional. Sweeps are butter, breaks good, melodies full. Good stuff !
Well, so how's it going ? lol, life and all that ?, i'd say keep up the good work but i know how it is, im pretty 50% active myself, actually it's more like 15 %.
Well, anyway (did you like that ?, did you like how i started the second paragraph with "anyway", the third with "well" and then due to my lack of imagination i bring it all to a climactic conclusion with "well, anyway").............. ......anyway.... good work both of you, have fun, take care.. and i'll see ya around or something.
Laterz, gentlemen.
lol xD
Thanks for the very good review as always ;),
theres always a good dose of humor aswell.
anyway, im not sure if im going to finish it xD (lost the most recent .flp file).
well, its somewhere for sure i guess..
Oh god i started my paragraphs the same lol.
grtz,
Endeavour & PaperMAN xD
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Endeavour 
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