@untitledbystander

your right can see the whole scene for me some awsome guy with a way to big swords smashing up hordes of incoming enemies in castle crasher styme or 8-bit syle
with a lil bit rpg elements in it would make a great game

It's a fight. .

Or a chase scene of some sort.

Oh, c'mon!
You know?

The hero's running through the field and slashin' passed bad guys, dashin', twistin', and such. Just DESTROYING everything in his path. This would make it a lot more intense.

whoa good luck song

i had a huge fite wit my girl yesterday and as 10 sec passed by listening she said i forgive u thnx dud3

Critique time!

This song is pretty good.
The melody was strong, but repetitive. The beat was steady. Also, the overall sound was high - you could do well adding in some deep bass. It also might detract from what you're doing, if you add too much - watch that.
I felt I was waiting for something more to come in. The section at 1:35 was a nice break, but I feel it needed different notes there - change the melody up a bit. Its the same 4 notes over and over.

Don't get me wrong. The song was really good. It could be better, but it will stand on its own.
8 stars, 4/5.

Going Somewhere? / KittehTron's Perrspective

You definately arre going somewherre with this! I liked it very much, so herre is my crritique! Firrst off you have a grreat melody! I would rrecommend taking the bass down an octave or two to add morre punch! (tip: even add a sub-bass, which is usually a sine wave playing one or two octaves below the main bass) I noticed the volume drrops a little too much at 0:57 and 1:37. Great song though! Look up sidechaining if you want to get basshunterrs "push and pull" effect on yourr songs!!

Style:8/10
Orrginality:7/10
Varriety/Hook:6/10
Note: Keep working at it!! Good job!
Final Scorres: 7/10
Rrating: 4/5