A New Day Is Rising [WIP]

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I like this one its my first minor song. Im gonna set it down for a little while and come back to it later with fresh ears. Hope you all like it!

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Very nice!!!!!!

It's like your going in to battle then u start the fight!!!!(ps, can i try 2 remix it?

Its nice

Sounds pretty empty throughout the whole thing until 1:48. Add some decorative sounds for the dull intro and this will be magnificent. It already sounds epic though like it could have been used in transformers or something.

jk182 responds:

Thanks for the review man. Yeah I imagine this song ending up 5 minutes long or so. I have a few ideas for the intro I will try out pretty soon.



I will review as I listen.

Ah, starting out with the old 1 instrument, going to 2, etc. You sound like me :P (maybe not a good thing ;P )

Yup, kind of distorted synth in there hitting all the obvious notes. Definitely sounds like me.

Ok, new guy at :56. You're still hitting the obvious notes. Diversify your melody! Make me go like :O

At 1:25 you bring in a cool beat, I like how it isn't shoved in my face. Props.

Aha, faceshoving is achieved at 1:48. That synth is brought back with that melody, stacked on that other melody. Dude, you write songs just like me. I love it. Well actually, I don't really give me songs room to breathe, and you have a lot of empty space, which I appreciate.

Work on your melodies a little bit.

long intro, but this is my type of music!!

I feel like you could use a bit more fx in the beginning during the long intro.

As a matter of fact, this really sounds like a song that would be a perfect match for the vocal style in "what is love" You should consider getting a few vocalists to do a collab on this, and have them take the place of the lead synth/add more decoration.

I LOVE making minor songs, and this really captured a minor techno feel.

The fact that it's so simple helps too..but i'm wondering if adding more decoration would help it out.

All in all, great potential, and it's pretty good by it's self as well. You have a lot of room to build on this too though, so just take that into consideration ;)

btw, i make music as well, would you mind checking out a few of my songs? You seem like you know what you're doin' ;)

jk182 responds:

Great response my friend. Im actually going to sleep now but tomorrow I will be sure to see what you have. =]

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4.17 / 5.00

Dec 17, 2009
10:44 PM EST
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7 MB
3 min 3 sec

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