He's A PiRate (ReMiX) {WiP}

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He's A PiRate (ReMiX) {WiP}

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My little rendition of the popular song "He's a pirate"
The beginning is a bit edgy, and i would really appriciate good reviews on fixing it or making it something better.
thanks!
enjoy!

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DJDarkEyes

2010-07-16 11:52:45

Awesome Remix/Remake!

I got no complaints about this at all. BUT, its this stuff that keeps me from making my own music, i could NEVER make a song this awesome. Good Job, Keep it up!

Chimy727 responds:

LOL
this is really old crap! it sucks compared to what i make now! xD
thanks tho that means a lot!
:D
-chimy727

dreadnought106

2009-11-21 17:51:29

Noice work

A bit more EQ work wudnt go a miss. Also the delay on that intrument from 1:18 onwards was too much- a little annoying is the only thing that comes to mind. The piano that comes after was a nice touch though- good thinking :P The seemingly randomnly placed kicks kinda ruin it- I can see there was some kind of plan there- but it didnt reli work. The "rave" part is awesome I will say. loved that part. Also the start wasnt that bad either. Lots of bass if a little badly placed :P

Noice work anyhow :)

-Dreadnought106

Chimy727 responds:

thanks, i really like this review a lot more than the guy below, because you were more positive, and constructive!
:D
thanks again, and ill put that stuff in if i got time
-chimy727

kjhsdgf

2009-11-05 20:28:38

okhey

the EQ is off, in that
the main saw (overused, imho) is too loud,
the kick doesn't have any variation.
the short lead sounded ok, but it's jsut kind of the same tune over and over.
time your kicks better, and make your bassline louder.
and try and add more harmonies and little things that spice the song up so it's not
just drum/bass/lead/chord, you need to add effects and little play-ins sometimes to break the tune up.

Chimy727 responds:

okay, thanks this helps a bit, i kinda think the lead (not saw) is pretty good, i guess it can go down a bit, and ill take that stuff into consideration!