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Sep 21, 2009 | 1:01 AM EDT
File Info
6.7 MB
5 min 51 sec
4.01 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 4.01 / 5 stars
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1,540 Plays | 55 Downloads
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Author Comments

I'm still very very new to making music. This is actually my first song, second submission. Let me know what you think, I could use some tips on creating music.



Rated 5 / 5 stars

omg i will getting down to this

Yeah really nice its like we are on summer and we can make be free from the fucking school ...well gonna to the instruments omg i play drumms but i never ear somthing like this is tottaly awesome only the drummer of THE POLICE or Alex va Halne can do that of rest more anybody u did a great job and the Destruction of the guitar is very great omg really god ... well me and some friends of school ur gonna make a band and we try to see some interents musics and i show that to my friends and they say: OMFG TOTTLAY AWESOME . well really nice i play drumms but not tho good like this. well good job =D


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Dynamically it was there....

For me, it just needed better phrasing, and maybe some variety in instruments.

Good job!


jon189t responds:

Thanks for the review, what did you mean by better phrasing though? Maybe you could drop a few lines in a pm ;). BTW, I'm still working on this song, its not perfect yet.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


Change what the main drum is from that weird tapping to something deeper and lower the chords an octave or change the instrument, and you have a masterpiece in my mind. 9/10 4/5.

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jon189t responds:

Hey thanks for the review, I tried to go for realistic sounding drums and this is what came with the program. I know what you mean by the "tapping" sound, but unfortunately thats the sound of the snare and it only makes that sound when quickly alternating between the bass drum and the snare drum, i dont know how to fix it. and by lowering the chords, you mean lowering the pitch of the guitar? That might or might not work cause it would be in a different key, I've messed around with it a lot. =P

Thanks a lot man, making music is pretty hard