Dark Dnb(demo)

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Hey all, this is my first submission, id appreciate any tips to improve my abilities, thanks!


Definitely hear talent.

You have a good melody, but the drum and hat drown it out quite significantly. Try using mixer tracks to equalize the sound (F9 in FL Studio).

Also, the melody of the song sounds like a slow trance to me and not drum and bass. Just my opinion though. Keep writing.

jon189t responds:

hey buddy thanks for the review. I just realized that i always use headphones when i work on making songs, so I didn't notice that the cymbals drowned it out in the original but thanks for letting me know. This song is far from being completed and i might not even finish it because of time constraints. The one thing that everyone is telling me to work on is phrasing, but I don't really know how I can improve it.. I don't understand the concept.

Not so bad for a first.

Some tips tho cus ur new:

1. The quality of this isn't so good so save it in a higher quality. DnB especially needs to be in high quality.

2. The drums aren't loud enough and volume leveling is an essential ability no matter what genre your doing.

3. DnB is a very hard genre to pull off and you did pretty good but i would suggest trying out different genres to not only find the one that you're the best at but to get a feel for all types of music.

Hope i could help


jon189t responds:

Thanks man! I'm just confused though. Your review says my drums aren't loud enough and the other guy says they are too loud..? Anyway, I've tried a rock/electronic music genre before and its actually my first song, this song is just my first DnB song(and submission). Check out "Revelation and Spies"

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4.30 / 5.00

Sep 19, 2009
5:23 PM EDT
Drum N Bass
File Info
2.2 MB
1 min 37 sec

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