2 Issues
Your instruments are too loud, and it creates white noise.
Also, in your comments, you have a grammar error. =P (Unnecessary comma before was.)
Author Comments
The original song, was too large for Newground's file size limit and to lower the quality as much as was needed was not smart, especially seeing as I already had this version written.
This version is faster than the original that you've never heard, and shorter too. The original is meant to tell a story when this one is meant to be some sort of background for a trailer of a movie or something.
Tell me what you think in reviews, their always appreciated! Also telling me what you don't like and with specifics like where in the song you hear things that you don't like (or that you do like) also help me pin point what you are talking about.
steelside responds:
White noise...??? If you mean peaking, its not; that's your speakers crapping out.
And why does that comma bother you so much?
nice
it really should be in some movie. it's a nice song to listen to too.
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