Your instruments are too loud, and it creates white noise.
Also, in your comments, you have a grammar error. =P (Unnecessary comma before was.)
White noise...??? If you mean peaking, its not; that's your speakers crapping out.
And why does that comma bother you so much?
it really should be in some movie. it's a nice song to listen to too.
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