keep it up
keep this up and you'll finally become a good rapper
Added excerpt from "D.O.A." by jay z
and sum addlibs(original verse n chorus)
plus upgraded the beat from a youtube rip to a real instrumental, lmao
I dropped ya as an infant
n I'll drop ya head again
The fans asked what happened?
I aint gon lie, I got bent
So lets set it straight 4 the record
I win again, ya bars droped outta ya skin
Pussy scared of BN fuck freestyle'n em
I'ma bring a second take write upon his face
But the second its too late I'll leave without a trace
Jus outline ma crime word up on some hot shit
Pop a scuat in ya mind and let the flava drop in
The end - of the rhyme, you thought it was over?
I'ma Spend this time to share some warm soda
Maybe then we'll see more of ya
Last few days I searched ma TV
And I aint find no mercury what exactly does that mean?
Ya overplayed yaself you definetely need some help
I broke ya down 2 easy, I pushed ya off the scene,
I took you off the shelf n dropped ya on yaself
I aint see no mercury
So lets try n listen
(this is an update of the diss to mseemercury btw)
keep it up
keep this up and you'll finally become a good rapper
can wait till that day
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ok?
ahahah
dont matter what you do n***a you cant stop rapid records. or hollow hearts!.. n***a ya flow is off on every song u in. U suk n***a! stop tryin to make music and put ya god damn busted ass mic down. You just embarrasin ya self
ROFL,
dick ridin homo- no matter what you do, you can't stop my magic carp!!!
*throws pokeball at BN*
dam it...
*goes on newgrounds, reviews another song*
mercury
merc murdered you
keep writing love raps about me
dude
you did ok in this on i aint no hater but you aint stopping merc
bro merc aint stoppin me either lmfao, wuts ya point? I jus re-did the track cuz I like how it sounds and I realized that the quality was way low...
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.