C-Enterprise

aint he the guy who made the beat u should put it in your credits

anyways yh u did ite

OK...

I don't analyse things too thoroughly, but your voice seems to waver on the pitch.
Also, take many takes on the singing - get the choruses done in one round, that way the lyrics can overlap.

ok..

so the lyrics where horrible, but since I am not a singer I will asses only the instrumentals.

for my sake can you post a version without the lyrics!