not much for rave but...

this one is okay, the problem that I see though is the overuse of synths... btw, (no offense to your friends, but) WHO CARES what your friends think? Let other people experiences your work, you never know who else might like your songs! One key to being an artist is to let go of yourself and release what's hidden inside. Have faith in how your music will turn out, either the criticism be good or bad. It's not what other people think, but how well-made you believe your music will be.

HEHA!

HAHA this is pritty maniactic, if I was at a rave with this music i would seriously be shitting my pants, its pritty crazy stuff. I think u got like 10 synths in there . Well keep trying. Remember to keep it symple. Hats, base drum, snare. Main melody, baseline which is a simple version of the melody, you get the idea. Well I hope you gained something inteligent from that. Peaceout. oh and if you have time, review me!! http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/261831