hehe
I remember my first bunch of songs sounded a lot like this. Practice a bunch and never give up. I think you used a bit too many synths and it kinda screwed up. The melody would actually sound pritty cool if it wasnt so berserk so to speak. Well its a cool song, chuck a review on me if u got zeh time :D http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/261831
peaceout :D