agreeing with acrolith
you do need a bass line, it is very important.
also, the drums you do have are weak. god made drums loud instruments for a reason, use them as such.
to be honest, all of the instruments are a little weak, don't be afraid to give the melody a triple forte.
over all not to bad.
I only have 2 problems with this piece: bad drums(like, really bad ones) and an overall lack of bass. Perhaps the composition lacks a bit of coherence, but then again, a tricky piece can be the best at times.
Other than that, this was just amazing. The melody at 21 seconds is great, why did it have to stop so soon? :(
Thanks for the review.
Did you mean the quality of the drums, or the actual beat.
if the quality, I'm still trying to find some good samples.
(those are the FL default drums)
Good job, I like it!