the cello is waht kills it. I love the harmony 1:117 tho. the drums are good but once again need work... u got the start of something great here.
Ruined by the sample
I very much agree with you - I wouldn't even recognize that as a cello o_o Seriously, it totally pretty much ruins the song. Otherwise the song is beautiful and soft and I like it!
Free samples are quite easy to find, though, just search for something like "free audio samples", find a nice site and be sure to check the license.