A little on the minimalist side, which I don't really fancy, but it was still a good composition, and wasn't necessarily BAD sounding. Just not my cup of tea.
thanks bro, i appreciate your opinion!
Wow, the piano was great, no doubt about it. Your lyrics are meaningful, flowed well, and sounded very poetic. Great job.
thank you! im working on the lyrics, im planning to place them in the song, read by sapphire or chris.. who knows, the song may improve
by the way, your last place song was really neat! i wish i could handle symphonys..
oh well, have a nice day!
Seriously man, that's the best thing you've made. And it gave me that good feeling, so I'll give it a 10 this time. The poem you write there could actually be sung into the song, so even you should try it or ask someone else :) I think that could make it even better if sung good.
For the composition itself... I like the tones. It reminds me a little of my own way of making music. When it goes fast it's just fantastic to listen too. You have a good tempo/rythem too. And that's all I really can say, now I will just enjoy it some more. Favorited :) I will return when you have something new.
im gonna go with a nice soothing female voice, whom can read the poem rather then singing.. but im really glad with the idea!
im also really glad you like it! :D
Pretty darn good
I love your piano composures. I liked the melody of this one, and how it's constantly changing, and it even loops nicely. It'd be amazing to hear it a bit longer, and with the poem spoken, or sang if that was the intention. I felt like the song should have gone on, though. Longer, and have a part with chords. There's a lot of 8th notes in there, maybe switch to some cool bassy chords on the rhythm hand with half notes, then two quarter notes? I'm a sucker for awesome chords, and I know you have the talent to find the right ones.
that really is a great idea! its a bit of an old poem, but i found it to fit the atmosphere of the score, but to accually use it in the song, i hadnt even thought of that! thanks a lot! i
ll probably exend it too, im gonna find a nice soothing female voice to read the poem :) ill defenitly let you know when/ if its done :D
you come up with some beautiful and sensible melodies. You truly speak through the instrument - this type of pieces are hard to find on newgrounds. glad I found one today. I made it a favourite.
thank you :) im thinking of letting the accompagnied poem be spoken by a female voice, and exending it a little ^^ im really glad you found something that is mine you like..
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.