Fantastic Piano
Wow, the piano was great, no doubt about it. Your lyrics are meaningful, flowed well, and sounded very poetic. Great job.
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A little musical scene by yours truly, tell me what you think (:
I wish it was yesterday,
For I would be whole,
Not miss my heart you stole,
In illusions I'd remain
I wish it was yesterday,
For I would have hope,
Hang onto that rope,
Which you threw away
I wish it was yesterday,
When the words you spoke were true,
Before I fell into the blue,
And the hope you gave me failed
I wish it was yesterday,
But I will keep on walking,
And even try to sing,
Until yesterday becomes today
Rwinius responds:
thank you! im working on the lyrics, im planning to place them in the song, read by sapphire or chris.. who knows, the song may improve
by the way, your last place song was really neat! i wish i could handle symphonys..
oh well, have a nice day!
Pretty darn good
I love your piano composures. I liked the melody of this one, and how it's constantly changing, and it even loops nicely. It'd be amazing to hear it a bit longer, and with the poem spoken, or sang if that was the intention. I felt like the song should have gone on, though. Longer, and have a part with chords. There's a lot of 8th notes in there, maybe switch to some cool bassy chords on the rhythm hand with half notes, then two quarter notes? I'm a sucker for awesome chords, and I know you have the talent to find the right ones.
Regards,
merlin
Rwinius responds:
that really is a great idea! its a bit of an old poem, but i found it to fit the atmosphere of the score, but to accually use it in the song, i hadnt even thought of that! thanks a lot! i
ll probably exend it too, im gonna find a nice soothing female voice to read the poem :) ill defenitly let you know when/ if its done :D
very enjoyable
you come up with some beautiful and sensible melodies. You truly speak through the instrument - this type of pieces are hard to find on newgrounds. glad I found one today. I made it a favourite.
gOrc
Rwinius responds:
thank you :) im thinking of letting the accompagnied poem be spoken by a female voice, and exending it a little ^^ im really glad you found something that is mine you like..
Ah..
Very pretty and heart felt.
It fits your story perfectly.
I wish I could say more but..
I think your piece said it all.
Rwinius responds:
.. thank you! im really glad you like it :)
Enjoyed it
Great piece my friend. I think you maybe should continue at the end very softly with the melody. Keep up the good work. 9/10 5/5
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