Not too bad,
But it's more like metal than rock... and yeah it's too bassy in the middle.
that was a pretty cool riff with the guitar at 1:50 too, lol
i used a Rob zombie sample in my latest work 2.... this song gets an 8... the samples are so slowed they distort... and the bass at 1:10 on is to loud... the jazz style guitar dont fit very well either.... you useing mixcraft? wanna colab on some spooky metal industrial type stuff? hell i have nothing else 2 do :P
Yes yes, this was done about four years ago, my first song! I'll have to re-do it one of these days.
I'd say I've improved my skill since then, check out my latest, it's called Forest of the Damned.