Cool

I enjoyed listening to this song, I thoguht the acoustic guitar in the begining reminded me of Nickelback - Someday. Then when the electric guitar came into action the guitar rhythm and sound reminded me of King Ring by Seryjouya (or something). But this song overall is very funky and catchy the same time.
Hope to hear more from you soon.

Sarah.

Really Cool...

But definitely shouldn't be in the industrial genre. X-D

I really like this a lot. Almost begins with a slight latin edge to it, then just grows and grows into a wonderful little rock tune. It has some very nice layers that help it build.

The guitar is pretty cool sounding in every single way you used it. Very original and full of energy, which is a good thing. I like the different effects and distortions you used and how they changed. Normally it wouldn't work, but for some reason it sounds great in this little tune.

I don't like how it ends. It deserves a clean and clear cut ending. So you should work on that. But other than the ending, this was great.

5/5 and 9/10 overall. I really enjoyed this.

-Gravey-

P.S. - Transfer this to the Rock genre. You can do that under the "edit song" options. It doesn't belong in industrial.