Hmm lemme tell u something
The beat and the synth bass is really good. Well don't get me wrong, it's a really good song but here are some things i want to complaing about:
I'm not really feeling ur chords, they don't sound so right. If u want, i can teach u how to make awesome chords :3
The song was repetive compared to the lenth of the song, and the song could use improves here and there.
Mastering, and the choir. When the violin come in at 1:17, it could be so awesome, but again, the chords were wrong :P
It's really a shame, because u are a really good composer, so if just ur chords were right, this would be a smash hit.
Btw, u kept my attention all the song.
Just do these things i told u to! Also a last hint:
The intro is way to sudden, u could make some evil effects and stuff, then drums, then break down, build up and climax. Then u would have an awesome DnB song on 3 min.
Thanks for your time! Hope this review helped ;P
5'd too :)
Keep it up :]