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NOTE: I deleted this and re-submitted it as it got zero bombed straight away cos people have really fun lives.

Here it is. Fleshbag's epic 'Mental Core' WIth my Vox :D. I had no idea what the lyrics were going to be about as I couldn't write a song called mental core, that would just be strange. But eventually they just started to flow out and this is the outcome. I'll leave you to figure out the subject :), the second line kinda gives it away, but meh.

Here's the original:
http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/257592
And here's a link yo fleshbag's page:
http://fleshbag.newground s.com/

Please review and tell me what I did well, what i did crap, and what I can improve on, you know the shit.

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Here are the Lyrics:
How many times must I say
You drop the bomb and all your dreams will fade
You'll spark the war and end the world
What did they do, the world is in your hands
What did they do
You came to me
And Asked for help
And all you do is ignore me
Listen to me

Ask yourself what did they do
Nothing at all will live all from your greed
Listen to me and not yourself
You'll end the world, and you will kill yourself

Power, Nothing else matters to you
Listen, and Listen to the screams the screams
Power, This can cloud your judgement
Listen, and you can hear the cries

Chorus:
We all knew that this was happening
Why did you do nothing to end it then
You walked away and look where you are now
One decision then could have ended all of them now

You walked away
You left us all
Listen to me
And Not yourself

One small swift push is all it takes
To end the lives of all the innocent
You'll end the lives of all things
How can you sleep with all of this on your mind

(Chorus)

It's your duty to save the world
Don't walk away it's not my call
Just say no
Blood Spilt by others but it's caused by you
Do you even have a conscience.
Just say no
Just say no
Just say no
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I hope you like it, don't forget to vote 5 ;) and zero bombers go have sex with your 90 year old great granny.

Thank you and good night :)