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A simple story of a young boy's dream of being an adventurer of the seas, encountering mystical islands, deathly storms, and living to be greeted by his family with a large festival for him to tell his tales.
First I want to note, that gravey did another excellent job mastering this. Feel free to ask him to master your stuff.
http://gravey.newgrounds .com/
I've been trying to "mature" my skills because lately, a lot of my stuff isn't exactly, emotion ridden, as it should be. Feel free to review :]
Aeris responds:
tahnks :]
:-D
How is it I never reviewed this?! Shame on me!
But then again, what is there to say that I haven't already told you?! So I'll just say this, it sounds all pirdy and stuff. :-P
5/5 and 10/10 overall.
This has been favorited!
-Gravey-
Good but...
Needs more whitenoise to help visualize the ocean. Still good job though :)
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