Has potential

Don't try to put too much into the song. Let the guitar do most of the work and make the drums in the background a bit more discreet. Don't remove them completely, but space them out at certain intervals during the song.

It's also a very catchy song. However, the drums and guitar sound jumbled and I didn't feel as though they were used as well as they could have.

Overall, a catchy song with a smooth melody and nice beat.

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Not that good, but not too bad either

I don't know what it is, but this song is quite catchy. Maybe it's the sad melody you where playing on the guitar. It just sticks in the head.

But I think the guitar needs a little tuning, it sounded pretty off here and there.

The drums didn't really fit to the tune, so a little more work should be put into the song. I had the feeling that both the guitar and the drums where playing at a different pace. I think a simpler drum beat would fit much better.

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Needs balancing

I think that you've got a decent sounding rhythm and beat, but other than that, it does sound like you're trying to squeeze a few elements too many into the tune in too short a space of time.

Perhaps try lengthening it and changing the backing drumroll beats that you've added - they sound like too many strikes of the drum, so it doesn't fit with the rest of the tune. Perhaps it's a start of something better, but it needs some work to reach the next level.

[Review Request Club]

A bit cluttered

The melody is alright, but very repetitive, so it gets boring quite quickly. Try adding more variety.

As many other people have pointed out, there are too many things going on, slightly out of time, so it sounds a bit cluttered and messy. You don't need loads of instruments to make a good song, so maybe try and cut down on some of them..

The ending was quite nice and fitting, so good work on that bit.

[Review Request Club]

Not the best

In the very beginning it was so quiet that I turned my speakers all the way up, just to be blown away by how loud things were shortly after. So a volume problem here perhaps where some instruments need to be turned down a bit.

I think the biggest problem other than that was the fact that there were so many things going on at once and they just didn't seem to mix well. It sounded very cluttered and just messy. Perhaps a bit complex?

The quality of the instruments themselves though were alright. I've heard better guitar before, but it wasn't bad by any means.

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