Great stuff

Film noir. City, night. Under a bridge, a woman's corpse lies in pieces. Police cars, investigators with cameras, flashing. Near them, a fence. Somebody is watching. Hands covered with blood. Camera rises up, we see a wicked grin - then the picture turns black.

You would get 10 if the main guitar sound was a bit better - I would like something less plastic, maybe something more metal-ey... :D I don't know exactly what, but I the current guitar sound kinda ruins it for me. A bit.