Nice, but I don't like it 4/10 3/5
The combination of instruments is powerful, the tones and chords you use are conflicting in a peaceful and mysterious way. However, even though it may be the point of the song, I don't like the repeating of the melody.. it irritates me.
It also ends suddenly, which I do not like. It would be better if it faded out.
If you had used a better (and less repetitive) melody, yet kept the same tones and feeling, this song would have been much better.
Good try.