Thought I'd make a little somethin' for the fourth o' Ju-ly. As far as my song making goes, this song is a bit on the experimental side, as it's related to my style. The structure is pretty similar to most of my other songs, but I tried a couple new manual synths and effects that i just recently learned to use. Probly the only flaw I'd really think is in the song is the filter screwup like halfway through the song, and the kick is a bit too powerful and drowns out most of the other stuff, but overall, I'd say that it's one of my better songs. (not saying much lol, but w/e)
So anyway, hope you enjoy the song. As always, any constructive criticism is appreciated.
Not bad.
For the sake of being constructive, I might recommend varying the drum fills, instead of using the same fill. I might also recommend making the melody a little louder or more powerful. Overall I enjoyed you ideas.
Also, if I were you, I might add some more to the bridge-like section at 2:03.
Nice dude.
I tried messin around with it a lot more, but i just couldnt nail anything that i seemed to like. I mean it's probly one of my more decent songs for having only worked on it for about 2 hours, but yeah, definitely could've used some more variation. What can i say, i'm pretty lazy lol :D
But hey, glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the feedback
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
DeatHTaX 
