actually

@Kioh: actually thats exactly why he can. he has nothing to lose. lol

i kinda agree with Zefy though. I dont think its really bad, but i do find it boring and not too catchy. It has pretty instruments used, but I don't like the repetitiveness or melody to it.

The intro does have a nice effect. I think the beginning is pretty good, but the rest I find repetitive personally.

lol

sounds like it is intended for Bruno or something ^_^ good stuff though.

zefy

if it sucks so bad y is it in toip submisions? Great song BTW

Uhmmm i Agree with Sikideku

Nice beat and everything, but you have to find yourself a mellow :D

It's not bad :3

I think it's very well done, and it has much potential, keep at it and don't be discouraged by assholes like Zefy. Speaking of...

Zefy: Just because you don't like it, that doesn't make it horrendous, and whether you realize it or not, everybody starts off new. And, honestly, if I were you, I wouldn't be speaking because I don't see ANYTHING in your profile, so I highly suggest you don't go around bashing people when you can't even show that you have any talent nor the will to try your hand at something.

Good job, DV, and once again keep at it! You have potential :] If you ever need tips or want to do a collab I'd be glad to, send me a message and I'll get back to you ASAP.