You should continue to work on it, but using the sounds in the project initially started in 2009, ie the original melody, kicks, and bass. All synths and other sounds around don't bring anything good to this track that had huge potential. Also, you should remove or change the voice that you added at 0.26, it doesn't fit the song at all. I give you 4 stars only because I loved the original one.
sounds like tasty chocolate! MMmmMMmm, how i love Chocolate! I:3
All and all, an amazing piece of art! 10/10 5/5!
a tad too much high end and the screech at the start is out of time, the melody it pretty awesome, fairly cool over all
Gonna shuffle to this with a couple friends. XD keep working on it. I got the MIDI
i realy like your song it is awsome
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.