not bad
You may want to link the two section with different beats a bit better they seemed very edgy and not intricately detailed. I like the tones though and the drumming but they definitely do need to be worked on my friend
I am trying a new approach at music. Taking my time and building up my songs.
I need some input, so please review and tell me what you think and if you can give me tips, all the better.
Thanks,
DjEvil
(EDIT) Remixed with a little extra and extended.
not bad
You may want to link the two section with different beats a bit better they seemed very edgy and not intricately detailed. I like the tones though and the drumming but they definitely do need to be worked on my friend
Thank you for your review, took your advice and tried to make it sound smoother. It still needs a lot of work. This will be one of my first songs that I shall make "hopefully" 3:00min long. After I complete it, I will go through and try to master it to try and make things seem like they flow better.
Thanks Again
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.