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You need to work on your flow when you rap, im talking about your performance. other than that, the lyrics are alright, and the song's layout was amazing.

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Snowball didnt work with well for ya? i see now. I suggest you to compress the vocals at about 27db. Then eq it. Make sure you load a predefined curve. After ya do that. Listen to how loud or soft your vocals are(amplify a small section if need). I can tell the vocals are a bit too loud. To fix this. Buy better headphones. The better the quality, the better the overall outcome will become. Well enough from me. This is pretty good and has alot of potential. Flows are good. Lyrics are also good. I dunno what this guy is saying about lyrics not matching the beat, but I thought it was good. You could maybe, I mean mabye, get something else, but this will suffice. Well good luck and keep up!