This seriously has great potential. The start is good and everything after is awesome. However during the last 10 seconds it felt as though the song was gearing up for something big only to end abruptly. If you add onto it and say make a little over 3 minutes this might become epic.
Awnsome rytm and beats I like that alot!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.