its not bad
ill give you a decent review =] if you want to review my stuff feel free to, but idc.
ill categorize this according to the stuff you used and score it accordingly
drums: 1/2
very nice drums, but its still lacking a bit. the kick is perfect and gives an instant star. the hi-hat and snare, on the other hand, could use some working. more volume might be good or even some effects could help it. i also suggest mayby adding some more variation in the drum instraments
bass: 1/2
the bass was very weak throughout, except for the one part at 1:12, that part is what gave you 1 star. i suggest improoving the bass a bit, the volume needs to be turned up, it sounds good but its soft.
mood: 3/3
its got a cool feel to it, its kinda makes me think of a robot factory. mostly cuz of that bass =] good job on the mastering and layering
overall: 2/3
its not awesome, but its not bad. deffinatly gets the head bobbing. and for that you get 2 stars.
so...
1/2 + 1/2 + 3/3 + 2/3 = 7/10
its good, but could use some work
-ganon95-