sporadic but with a lovely conclusion
I think you probably intended for this to sound kind of disjointed and sporadic in some parts mostly in the beginning, so I'll say no more about it.
Otherwise, this is a very interesting piece of music, and I think with an orchestra it would sound pretty cool haha.
definitely one of your stranger pieces, and I really enjoy it, possibly because of its so simple yet still gives me alot to rock out to. I especially enjoy the break down, which builds back up incredibly.
and a feeling of paranoia is definitely brought across, which i like a lot.
I think the reason it has a low score on the votes is probably because it starts out very disjointed, and ppl are like, geeeeeeh and immediately vote it low and move on, but it gets so much better further on.