Picture this in your mind while listening to the song,
You are starting to realize that this war will go on forever, it will have no end until everyone is dead. You look around your surrounding and see the blood on the walls, dead bodies everywhere, you hear your friend screaming in pain from a gun shot wound, you can't take it anymore. Shots being fired from all directions, the earth shaking from the enemies tanks, and the march of soilders ready to kill you. Is this really the end of it all?
Well that was a really stupid paragraph I wrote, but I hope you get the feel of the song.
This is VERY simple and not really completed, I need your advice everyone, and please don't zero-bomb this.
Enjoy!
DJ Sumara
It seems a little sparse
I like this song
but its a little to reverby take it out just a bit or just find a different way to use it.
Good vibrant melody just needs some sort of a feature some kind of a wow factor. I know you want it to be sparse. Seeing as you have this war zone story why not add sound effects of gun shots. and explosions and some really high velocity percussives to make it a little more interesting. Still a nice sound and a very decent mix. 7/10 4/5
Thanks for the review :D
Very very nice
8 caus of the length :) i don't get enough eargasm to a 9 caus it's so short haha..
But could you do me the favor and tell me when this is done?
Helth
5/5
Very nice, can't wait to hear the full ;)
No problem, I just wanted to make this short and simple, nothing too big, and I will tell you when it is finished and when I make a different version of this
This is hott
Great feel to the song.
The piano was great.
I really like when it picked up.
Also, great use of the violins, and other pads you used.
5/5
Thanks, I will adding more elements to make this piece sound like a true song
()()()()()()()()()()!
Great song and the visual really put a lot more thought into it all stranded and alone..
GREAT JOB!
Thanks, glad you liked it :D, Like I said this is just the preview, just imagine the actual song.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
KrisSumara 
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