"ughh" -_-

More variation, bigger bass, and the kicks should be a bit louder. The melody basically saved your ass for this review because its quite catchy and also because its you first Hardstyle tune, I'll give you a 4/5. If you want to be big and all that I suggest taking notes from other artists. Listen to thei music and see the differences. I listened to your other ones btw and you have improved but not that much.
DJ LoneWolf

Hmmm..

It was an alright song, but i expected a bit more from a song thats called hardstyle.

The other are right, a bit more variation is needed.

But otherwise it was pretty good. Good job!

I can see this going somewhere.

Great start into hardstyle.

Try to variate more, maybe add some filters and crashes for effect.

Look into getting some High end synthesizers to add to the sound.

With kicks dont raise them in pitch or lower.

Keep kicks constant so the song has some grounding.

Have a kick bass trade, while the bass moves the kick remains giving the illusions of changes in pitch without killing the moments.

Look for a punchy feel in the kicks and make em Louder! It's hard style!

Also, Variate the kicks and claps, add some random breaks and scheme changes.

Good Start, but a little lacking.

Still I give you 7/10
4/5

Good First

Since this is the first hardstyle attempt! Good work!

My Advice is that since this is hardstyle, that lead should have some more scream to it, not volume, but some strong compression, Look into Cakewalk Boost11.

That'll give you the desired Scream.

Good Work.

-Alonso Mejia

I really like this :)

Very good.

My only advice is make it a little more varied I guess?

I don't really know.

I really like the melody; good job on that :)

4/5 8/10