Cool stuff
I feel that every high synth doesn't fit with your pads. They're just too different from each other. You get these acid-style and pluckish leads that just don't fit with the filtered pads. However, I do like the progression very much. It does have a Mau5 feel to it, but I do believe that more practice is needed to really get his feel, flow and vibe. I speak from experience when I say this: Hip-Hop, as well as any other style work the same way; to get the proper vibe and understanding, you need to practice and practice. I'm currently practicing Hip-Hop and have been since July and only now am I beginning to properly get a grip on the style.
Keep it up though, I see lots of potential.
-Frankie