some of the parts change kinda randomly. the bass is pretty deep, its alright.
the intro is okay, except the synth kinda "intrudes" into the song. not much transition. the sound that comes in at :21 comes for 16 beats and then drops, then comes back for 32, but it seems to come and go randomly and sound repetative in my opinion.
at 1:28, though, it seems more organized. that part is better to me. i think the song could just use a little more organization and transitions. i do hear the effect placed between them, which is good, but the instruments don't fade out or anything, they just cut ;) and finally, that bassline is very repetative in my opinion.
im not telling you to change everything, but im just making suggestions. i thought this was a really random piece ;)
Hey, I might use it for my first game. Do u mind?
Overall a great song, but I do HATE one thing. Your bass beat that has the kind of static sound to it. Listening to it give me the worst head ache after only 20 seconds..... Please take that off or change it and you'll have a good song. Other than that, everything else was fine (Great beginning btw!).
I liked it. I didn't seem to assume anything like most on NG do. It has a good flow and a great beat. loops ok too. I'd say your almost Paragonx9 caliber.... at the very least you're on the playing field with Eon's best work.
hope you don't mind if i use this for a vid
because this is an absolutley amazing song,i thought i'd never find a song like this and here it is right infront of me. favourite author+ /favourite song+ /download+ =D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.