whitewater currents [PP]

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whitewater currents [PP]

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UPDATE 1: made a few adjustments, added a pad later on, kicked the basses sooner, changed a middle part with a more high pitched melody, to fight repetition. Some minor tweeks here and there.

UPDATE 2: just some minor tweeks this time

Well new trance track, what's it been a month ?
This isn't as good as i wanted my next track to be. But you know, lately i just can't get myself to run FL studio, no will, no inspiration. So i kinnda forced myself to make a track (+ I was bored).

Along the way I got some good ideas and some inspiratious moments, so Im kinnda happy with this song, well it's my track, and i always like my tracks though, so maybe it's that. It was ispired kinnda with the general idea of escape, you know sometimes when apathy, life, responsibilities and so on.. well when that kicks in im like "hey man i just want to have fun", bah im not gonna babble anymore about that here.

Anyway, enjoy the song, hope you like it, any and all feedback much apreciated.
I really want to know what you guys think about this, especially what's bad and needs fixing.

Well enough about that.
Sit back, relax , and enjoy the music (or not).

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DjCoast

2009-05-14 09:13:57

keep it going on

awsome dudeh!!!!!
hahaaaaaaaaaaa nice one
keep it up ma friend :D

cyaz

PeckaPrime responds:

HEY HEY !!, damn man, it's been a while.

I see you're making a lot of loops, some songs too, making melodies and just music is the fun part right, fucking with it to make a song is the hard work.
Well at least that's how i feel, I'll definetely keep it up, just don't know when, cuz im really lazy lately :D.

Anyway thanks for the review man, i apreciate it, and im glad you like the song :D, Always good to hear from you dude, have fun man, and i'll catch ya later.
Keep it rockin' :D

St0rmChaser

2009-04-12 02:32:42

Very nice !!

I shall start with what i liked a lot. (which is the biggest part of this review).

You improved A LOT in your progressions, and i can say you even surpassed me in that. at 2.10 you did something with your melody, how did you do that ? was that a flanger ???. Also the melody ROCKS like hell. its full and bright with enough treble.

The counter melody you added later in your song is also wonderfull.
I would never think you had dead or alive 4 in your mind when you made this.
It is also suited for a loop xD.

The criticm :

Your intro.
That clap you placed in your intro didn't fit.
you should leave the first kick without a clap, and the second with a clap.
you now have the first kick with clap, second one without clap, and so forth.
you should reverse that.

I was listening this with a headset on, since my bass is actually blown to pieces.
(it fell on my head when i played a hard bass. the subwoofer is making small jumps, and his last jump was a launch of 1 metre full on my head... )

i can't review you more right now.
im tired as hell, and i dont have a full quality potential right now.
So it would probably be mean to write one.

In short:

I keep noticing improvements in your songs.
Some of your elements in your song are already better filtered than i can !.
Keep going mate =D

10/10 5/5
4.43 / 5.00 (+ 0.100)

Take Care,
St0rmChaser

PeckaPrime responds:

Thanks for this nice review man,
Im glad that you liked the song, the effect I used there is the phaser. It's always cool to hear that you like my melodies :D. Also DoA 4 rocks XD.

Thanks a lot for the heads up on that intro clap, I didn't notice it, but now that you mention it, I kinnda see it. Fixed that. I'll tweek with it some more when i stop lazying around.

So the sub tried to kill you ?, but you offcourse were ready for it, so you headbutted that muthaf***a. You don't mess with guys that run after storms.

Anyway, thanks for listening, reviewing, voting and enjoying this track. Thanks for the kind words, I'll be sure to bug you when i make something new. :)

You have fun now, and stay safe :D, see you later man.