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Leaving the solar system [PP]

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Well here it is... my new trance track.

I've been ispired mostly by Airwave, can't stop listening to his Trance set on the Trilogique album for like 2 months or something :D.

Anyway it's been quite some time from my last trance track, and i think it shows. I've improved a lot, so this is probably the best thing i've ever made. I'm getting better, and now im finaly able to make the trance i've always wanted to make. Still if you notice anything wrong, anything that needs fixing please tell me so i'll make it even better :).

With all that said, please sit down, relax and enjoy the music.

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I like it :D

I like it, soothing xD

PeckaPrime responds:

Thanks man, glad you enjoyed this song :D

Haha!

Your response to ShenshuaiOne's review down there is priceless!!! Fucking hilarious man!

This is pretty cool man. I'm not a fan of trance in the least. BUt this is decent. It isn't all just effects throughout the song, which I hate so much in trance.

The melody is decent. It isn't exactly catchy, but what trance song does have a catchy melody. This fits the style and song just right.

I do think you could expand on the beat a little bit. I know trance typically doesn't have great and crazy beats and rhythms. But I think you could add a delay effect on the kick or something in places to give it a little extra flavor. Then make it pan around a little bit to give it some ambience.

I like it the most when it kicks in around 3:30-ish. Very cool feel there. That is where I think you could throw on the delay and pan effects on the kick. But that is only my opinion. Take it or leave it as you will. :-P

But really, this is pretty good for a trance song. Really follows the structure and tone well. So good job here bud.

4/5 and 9/10 overall.

-Gravey-

PeckaPrime responds:

Thanks man, glad you got a few laughs out of that one. :D

I respect you listening and reviewing a song, that doesn't really belong in a genre you enjoy. I normally don't do that, cuz i always get the feeling that my review wouldn't be objective. For example that's why i've never reviewed none of Badspreekill's songs even though he was one of the first to fave me, and I listened to all of them. But I always get the feeling that my review wouldn't do those songs justice.

Anyway that's not the case here, you actually gave me some good ideas, I aswell don't like my kicks sounding generic. So in this song there a second layer of different kicks doin their thing at the end of each bar. And i use delay alot (to some extent, not much on the kicks though) .But i've never really used paning much in my songs, im definetely gonna play with that in the future.

Well, anyway (I allways want to start my paragraphs with anyway, but since i started the above one with that i added "well" here, Im witty) thanks for the review man, and the score and the hints.

Thanks mate, and see you later.

just a quick question!

what does this have to do with leaving the solar system?

I guess I can't leave Earth without this!

PeckaPrime responds:

You mean you don't know the procedure to leave the solar system ?!?
1: drink a shitload of beer
2: get your towel ready
3: play this track really loud or just hum the melody REALLY loud
4: rave around for a while doing the above
5: men dressed in white should pick you up shortly

awsome

wow dude!!!
awsomenes!!!
u improved aloot!!!!
love this one
deserves a download!
10/10
5/5

cyaz man!!!
;D

PeckaPrime responds:

Thanks man :D
I'll be sure to KEEEEP IT UUUP !!! :P
Thanks dude, for the vote, review and awesome score !!

Have fun man, and I'll see you later

wow

You realy have improved quite damn lot :O

This is actually starting to sound like a professional track !!.
I had a hard time with thinking of some criticm for this :P.

Maybe your first part of the song is a littlebit repetitive.
For the first 2.25 min nothing important happens :P.
After that theres a nice break which introduces a new melody, that is cool.
Maybe you could variate your melody at the second half of the first half of your song :P. and no melody variation, but a variation on the sounds.

Ok i realy can't say any more :P, the song is to good for any more critic points.
When you also fix the thing i stated above in your next song, and make the song variating a bit more, it will be better then my songs :P.

You have potential mate :)

greets St0rmChaser.
5/5 10/10 4.21 / 5.00 (+ 0.13)

P.S im also busy with a new song.
its called : St0rmChaser - Iron [RmX]

Its not done yet, and im uploading it as a test sub :P.
Could you review him ? ^^.
I bet u can think of some critic points :P.

PeckaPrime responds:

hehe, thanks mate
I see what you mean with the first melody, I agree, good suggestion.
I'll keep that in mind in the future, i'll experiment with variation some more.

Better than your songs eh ? About that, maybe when i pick up some more skills in FL I'll reach like 1/3 of your production level. Really man, each time i listen to one of your songs i go like "damn that dude probably spent 300% more time producing this then making all the patterns" It almost sounds overproduced occasionally :P.

Thanks friend,
new track eh ?, I'll go check it out

See ya

Credits & Info

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Listens
2,375
Faves:
2
Downloads
90
Votes
9
Score
4.66 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 3, 2009
1:15 PM EST
Genre
Trance
File Info
Song
7 MB
5 min 7 sec

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