I agree with wyze

Aiight heres an honest review.
Many of these lyrics dont make any sense whatsoever. Simply rhyming isnt enough to make a good song. Also if making a diss song, avoid complements (comparing me to eminem??). Your flow on this one is definatly better than any of your other shits except the part where you stumble at "you small part, time chick n
thinkin poles r better".

Off the serious review, i enjoy your hate. Jealousy is a bitch huh? Hey why dont you come drop some 5's on my page? haha Eat me hoe.

P.S: My virginity is on your feet caus i came in your pregnant mom, Im not an abusive father, but i enjoyed beatin the shit outta you.

ok?

second get ya virginity
literaly off of ma shoes

So you're saying he hasn't fucked your shoes. What is with that line? When your quality is off (not something you can be blamed for) and your flow still needs work (something you can be blamed for, although in all fairness, you have been improving.), then your lyrics all need to be great. These weren't great, some of them didn't even make sense.

I understand you're trying to do a diss a day, but quality over quantity man. Keep at it, but take your time