what if say im the best at rapping?
can you not take it then?
...
like eery day i try to get to the top
aint no one eer gonna make me stop
when someone tries to take me down ill reach out and grab my crown
they wont eer try to make me take a step down
with baybay by my side and co producer disco dan
we'll take people out there like an unmarked white van
they will scream till they choke
they will cry till ive spoke
they will be hustled all the time till theyre foreer broke
...
i wont eer be destroyed
i will foreer be annoyed
by the media and the tv
im like a ghost they cant see me
the schools have been burned
by the teaching i have learned
i will rise to the top and foreer be scorned
by the parents and the church
my raps have been hurt
but they comin back to scare
like a horrible nightmare
no one can bring them down
im like a phsyco clown
if you dont like me then get outa town
Beat By:Michael425
what if say im the best at rapping?
can you not take it then?
0_o
dude the beats good but the rap is CRAP! and the speed racer part?? seriousley get a life man!...
not to good at all
the rapping is not good at all the beat behind it was really good though but the stupid ass lyrics were really gay. you need to stop trying to be ganster and leave it to the pros. the stars i gave are to michael425 for the beat, the rapper gets a 0
wtf?
wtf was up with the eer. and eery. it doesnt make you gangsta.
you just sound like a poser im sorry to say. rhymes are premature, not creative at all.
if this was a freestyle it would be towards the shitty end, but at least it wouldnt be considered to be a disaster.
Thanks for your opinion
haha
that waz ight
Thanks prolly the first positive comment!
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