Dude, that was good but...........................
MAN!!! Your bass was WAY TOO HIGH if we compare it to the rest of the band... The bass it,s just the "Rhytm" for the lower tone. It's just like a bass tune... and bass solo... that suck quite a bit. ADJUST THAT NOW DUDE!! If that wasn't that... perhaps that would be a 8-9...
WHAT DUH HELLZ
It doesn't seem to have the loud tone to be called rock.
It's just how it seems to me.
Definitely bring out the main theme more.
For the first 50 seconds , I didn't even notice the melody... I thought this was just a very unique rendition.
Don't be afraid to mix things up a bit more. Once you've established a pattern, throw it out the window. Let different parts get louder at different times, throw in some new sounds when we get used to the old ones. Right now it's a little monotonous.
But all the above isn't to say that this isn't good. It's still an entertaining rendition of an enjoyable song. I expect to hear good things from you in the future.
Good rendition of SMW, I like the force of the bass. Probably next time though, go ahead and bring out the melody a bit more.
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