I agree with the guy under me.

This is pretty good but needs more variation. The main theme is pretty good, but there are only what, 5 different sounds (not including variations of a sound) in the whole thing? You need more.

Good potential, needs work.

Bah, fuck the gut under me.

i'll be brutally honest though. this isnt bad but not great. it's kinda basic and repetitive but still sounds good. though it sounds a little off key, it's not bad.
just make it longer with a little variation and fluxuation and make the tune a little higher and you're gold.