On any voice but the keys or synth you used, like with a real band, this could be pretty awe-inspiring. That lead is pretty awesome. I could see a good deathrock band pulling this off. If you came back to it later in a different form, I'd be rather pleased :)
do you mean i should try out a different voice for the synth-y parts in the second section? cuz i could prolly do that.
and yea i could prolly pull this off on real life instruments (i play guitar, drums, and a little keys. the bass just follows the guitar so i could prolly play the bass too). In fact when i get done with it in fruity loops i might just go ahead and do that lol.
this song makes me think about mario when his fighting a boss LOL