I kinda like it. The structure of the song is obviously very basic and it gets boring after a while but you seem to have something good going on here. I would definitely spend some more time on it if I were you. If you can play the drums irl, then you def should.
i can play drums irl, it would be my main instrument if i had a drum kit. but right now i just use friends' drumsets and sometimes i go to music stores and use theirs... just a matter of time.
thanx for the review man, i actually love the criticism. it tells me where i need to improve.
this isn't the final version either, but ya, when i get the final done, i might add vocals too and upload it again. this would actually be the first real recording i have done. all my other stuff (i have tons i just haven't uploaded yet, cuz no vocals, and the tracks feel empty without them) is synthesized.