It's Alright...
Idk man, I'm about 1:00 into the song and I hear no technicality at all really. Just really plain Jane riffs that go nowhere.
I love brutal metal, but brutal metal with a point and purpose. This is just breakdown after breakdown and nothing much more to speak of. And that isn't really good, cause breakdowns are typically for little 13 year old kids who couldn't write a real riff if their lives depended on it.
Breakdowns can be effective, but god this is just way too much. It becomes very dull after about thirty seconds. It does start getting a little more complicated towards the end, but nothing really that grabs my attention.
You should write some actual riffs that are more than just two power chords played in a syncopated rhythm. That is effective for a short term effect. A section in a song, but for the whole song to be this it is just rather annoying. Sorry to say, but the guitars are just really weak.
The drums are alright, but they follow the guitars too much. Give me some thrash beats and double bass. The kick followed the guitar riffs almost through the entire song. Talk about boring. You played maybe three chords at the max in any one riff, then had the kick play the same rhythm as the guitar riff. Booooooooooooooooooooooooooriiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiing.
And really, you need something else to add to this. Keys, orchestration, maybe the screams of dying children in the background. Something at least. This is so transparent it is ridiculous. Sounds like a watered down form of Lamb of God, without the vocals. Only difference is their riffs are pretty complex, whereas these aren't.
1/5 and 2/10 overall. This was just too bland for me to give any real merit to.
Best of luck on future projects.
-Gravey-