OW MY EARS... the panning at the start gave me a headache after three seconds, and there's too much emptiness. WAYYYY too much emptiness, its like writing a sentence like this its annoying right? and almost no melody.
Great song! Just don't like the vocals. Probably because I didn't put in any vocals in my songs, but still great song otherwise!
but has slow buildup and the rythem just isn't good.
ur on ur way
u just gotta keep trying. its not terribly bad, but lacking in some areas...
It was alittle bit all over the place, it didn't really have a flow, and often you build up the song up and then don't go anywhere with it, but still, not horrible.