Lp- Effort

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This isn't done.
There's a few mistakes. I have ideas for what I'm going to do with it.

Personally I think this is big progress for me.

What do you think?



-awesome melody
-good progression
this is an awesome piano song. i think you should get yourself fl or something and build off of it to make a complete song. this is awesome work.

10/10 5/5- because the drive for music must prevail.



Finally man... Also right when I got my computer back... so make sure to check out the 7 days of lub coming your way. =P

Ok enough self advertisement. To tell you the truth... I started listening...

and a yawn came to mind. The slow pace of the song was wearing on me.

BOOM! From nowhere it burst into a fury of awesomeness and classical... Agh... what's it called. Delight? No. Enlightment? Better, but not the word. Extreme pleasure. That's what the word I'm looking for. It was fantastic.

This is so much of an improvement. SO MUCH. I'm dead serious when I say that to man. You've taken your old work, that mind you wasn't bad, and shredded it compared to this.

One thing that I will say could be improved... The ending. It was very fast. Not a problem with that, but it ends to quickly for it's speed. Atleast in my opinion. I think to improve this you could add a powerful last note. And maybe make it echo off.

Other then that man. You've done an awesome job here, I don't know as if there is more that I can say.

9/10 (Very close to a 10/10, but like you said there are somethings that need to be fixed)
5/5 (Very very much a 5.)
Downloaded (Yes indeed. I don't think I needed a little add on here. Oh well, better not stop the flow.)
Fav'd (My all time fav of yours, and it's going down as #4 on my fav lists. Make sure to make an art cover for it so it can look pretty on my page. If you want I would be happy to make one for you.)

That sir. Is the end of my huge review.

Well done. Well done.

Lpauley responds:

made me feel all warm and tingly.

but in all honesty, thanks.

I think i'm going to finish this one up for a while within the next week, and then make revisions to my demo and progress uploads which are ickk

i really liked the ending
what would you change about it?
like do it the same, but sustain the last note and hold it out?
midi files don't do that T.T

once i get a cable i'll do it and upload to you and you can judge it.
thanks so much for the review man.

i just don't know how i follow this song up.

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3.81 / 5.00

Mar 3, 2009
11:01 PM EST
File Info
1.4 MB
2 min 4 sec

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