give it one more intense beat

just one then it'll be perfect or just leave it the way u like it two great sug. by me

No harm done in trying

At first i didnt think this was going anywhere. But the delayed crash really propelled this song into a while new level. I would have kept the ambience when you switched to the popping noises...i think they were clavis or something. I very much enjoyed the bass switch up right after that, sort of wish you extened that part longer. All of the overlaying synths parts worked very well together.Very simple, but good noe the less.

Great

Okay your a very good musican, (you probably know that) it sounded pretty good, it doesn't have that unprofesional beat, it's acctualy very profesional, I cans ee you go far with your talent.