i think we have a talent here.
i have reviewed your other songs 10 out of ten 5 out of five. WHY?
listen. work it out.
This is your basic stuff eh?
YOU tell me when you bring in this complex stuff then mate and im their like a moth to the flame!
WOW! you have captured a real emotion in this piece. very innocent, but almost with a twist of insecurity. It does have a slight startlit quality, and it is very uplifting. Truly the best one yet. if you have to improve anything. work on this one. and really blow me away.